Monday, September 29, 2008
100 words 3
You’re running with all your might to catch that train. You must get there. Your job depends on it, and your job is most important. It’s what you think about nonstop, whether alone or with family. It consumes you. You’re angry. You hate being late. Your train leaves in one minute, and you realize that you’ve missed it. Now what? You see people coming and going. You think about your family and all the time you didn’t spend with them because you had work. You regret your decisions. You realize work has overrun your life and you want to change.
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12 comments:
haha i think this is a good peice, it leaves you thinking that work can really take over situations in your life
I really liked this because the author put you as the character. It gave it a different feel to the story and I really enoyed it.
This makes me think that we all need to slow down and think about wwhat's important
i enjoyed reading this piece because it was all true, sometimes people/our parents get caught up in work a lot and you dont see them so much.
I like this, and I think that it leaves you thinking about your own life and the things that we give up in order to follow our dreams.
good,the auther put you in the charactor's shoes and made you think that you need to change
This is also a good idea becuase it is true for the majority of the people. They always rush and try to be at work to make money but do not see their faaimily as being important.
I really liked how the writer related to something that happens often in our lives. It is a common problem that people face.
it reminds me of members of my own family, cool piece. deffinatley a perfect plot for second person pov
Yeah, I like how realistic this is. Some parents just get so caught up in work that they don't even think about the things they should be caring about until it could be too late.
I like how you wrote the story in second person and you can put yourself in this characters shoes.
I liked this because I felt like the main character running for the train, because they said "You".
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