garbage
My day started off fine. I was sitting in my room, just relaxing like every other meaningless day. But today something new happened, something I never saw coming, who would’ve thought that I, a little plastic knife, would get his chance to shine and cut.But back to the story, my door opens and in comes a giant, five legged octopus grabbing and rummaging through my room and all my brothers and sisters. The octopus grabs me and yanks my white, shiny, plastic body out of my room. It feels as though the octopus is choking me to death and is refusing to let me go. I try to scream at this monster but my words don’t come out loud enough. He starts jerking me back and forth cutting up this big, nasty, red, juicy thing that looks like an apple, I couldn’t get a good glimpse, and the monster was moving me way to fast.To be honest with you I don’t think I’m cut out to be a knife. I woke up after passing out from that stupid octopuses cutting techniques, in a pitch black, smelly cave. I worked my little, plastic body up towards the top of this pile. It seemed as though it would never end. It just kept going and going, I was just about to give up but suddenly I notice a heavenly light coming from above me. I look around and I notice the stench, it couldn’t be! I am not, no, this isn’t right. How could I be garbage?!
Thursday, September 25, 2008
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11 comments:
i feel like this peice has a lot of creativity in it and that they thought hard about it.
This was really cool and fun to read. It made me think and the ending was great.
I really, really like this. It’s very creative and unique and I love the descriptions and ideas. Really great job.
hahah i really liked this piece. It surprised you that it was a knife. i thought it was really creative, expecially coming from that picture. It was really interesting and I laughed. It was funny.
jackie c
wow that's so creative! I never would have thought of something so cool! The ending really makes me wonder what it would feel like to be disgarded like garbadge. (seriously. no joke)
This story was very creative and I like that the writer used a perspective of something other than a person.
i think this piece is very creative and i like how you gave a knife all of these emotions. Good use of personification
haha i liked this story a lot. it was so entertaining and in a way, kind of funny. it is so creative to use an inatimate objest as a character and the author really pulled it off!! :]
i like how they aren't a person in this, but they are a plastic knife. It is different and i like it.
This short story was very cute and creative. I liked the way it was from ht eprospective of a knife, rather than a human. Good use of personification.
creative story and unique. intristing how you conect the garbaje into it.
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