Monday, September 29, 2008
100 words 6
You look around, and there are many people. Some are young, some are old, some are male, some are female, all different, none the same. You are surrounded by people, tons of people, but you have never felt so alone. There are people running, some go into you, like you’re a figment of their imagination. You look into peoples eyes and see their soul but they do not see yours. Then, you turn your head ever so slightly and see a man, he is doing the same. You wait for his eyes to reach yours, and then it happens.
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15 comments:
I like how it is very suspenseful and you are left thinking of what happens.
i like the way it was written, and i like the ending. So you are unaware of what will happen next
Wow I really like the feeling this gives. it's so spooky yet filled with hope. and the first part really feels like there's a bunch of people running around. it's so cool :D
i really like how the author used second person and how then ending is duch a cliffhanger. it makes you want to read more!!
I liked the way that the writer had the character make a connection with another character. The end also makes you think.
I really like this. I like the idea and the style and I wanted to read more.
this is awesome, i really enjoy these kinds of pieces. great job
It was an interesting idea, t really does relate to the picture as one can imagine being lost, yet alone in that sea of people.
I like the way you can feel as if you are the character and feel his pain.
I like the way this made me think. It was like the character was a ghost, or something. Awesome job, I liked it.
This story was very creative. I like how the author was very descrpitive and used connections.
i am left wondering what has happened when the two people met eyes, really leaves me thiking
what happens! this really left you suspenseful and I really liked it. It deffinitly leaves you wanting more and I enjoyed it.
jackie c
it makes me happy how he meets someone that feels just like him at the end.
keeps you thinking at the end
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